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w d s
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are percolating
in my brain
but are not yet ready
to be poured.
swirling
to the top
and then sinking
to the bottom
like tea leaves
waiting
for the psychic
to read them
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w d s
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I love this! Playing with words is so much fun, and you've done that in a couple of ways in this poem. Can't wait to see what's next!
ReplyDeleteYour words have settled beautifully on the screen.
ReplyDeleteSo fun! Sorry you are living through another storm. :-( Winter go away already!
ReplyDeleteFun! I am finding that this challenge is helping me percolate some ideas too. Now, I must ask - have you ever had your tea leaves read?
ReplyDeleteNope. I didn't even intend to talk about tea leaves when I first put words on the page. They just seemed to appear
DeleteGreat way to express your words - I like how you seemed let them float on the page.
ReplyDeleteDelightful, Deb! The format is adorable, and the main poem has such strong images. Loved it! :-)
ReplyDeletewords + ideas + percolating = brilliant writing to come!
ReplyDeleteThe way the visual/spatial arrangement of the letters matches your metaphor tickles me. Everything fits together just right in this poem.
ReplyDeleteLove the shape of this poem! Can't imagine how long it took you to make it look like this! Perfect!
ReplyDeleteJust right, Deb, but this seems mysterious too. Is something really brewing?
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