tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post7230897526837825408..comments2023-06-15T10:30:47.121-05:00Comments on Stories with Sophie: #15 of 31 WaitingDeb Dayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00861392500601183208noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-55140240003822849442013-03-16T07:43:14.036-05:002013-03-16T07:43:14.036-05:00Chloe apparently is already waiting. Your descrip...Chloe apparently is already waiting. Your description of the quiet of your house right now took me right there. I'm guessing the sound will change very soon. Enjoy! <br />Cathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08233792477358685156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-18510583576834745272013-03-16T06:45:29.947-05:002013-03-16T06:45:29.947-05:00Not just one, Judy. SIX. And their dogs. It'll...Not just one, Judy. SIX. And their dogs. It'll be crazy funDeb Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861392500601183208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-54123269135069549532013-03-16T06:24:45.650-05:002013-03-16T06:24:45.650-05:00I can feel Chloe's (and your) anticipation at ...I can feel Chloe's (and your) anticipation at the coming of a visitor. Somehow they know when something different is about to happen. Enjoy!Judyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12901374472056625859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-2361479449970401392013-03-15T23:27:57.189-05:002013-03-15T23:27:57.189-05:00Chloe is such an effective character in your writi...Chloe is such an effective character in your writing. She is so much bigger than her fur and heartbeat. Enjoy your company!Christy Rush-Levinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15581876400990779210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-78214404466988254632013-03-15T21:43:24.422-05:002013-03-15T21:43:24.422-05:00A special visitor is coming! What fun for you and ...A special visitor is coming! What fun for you and Grandpa and Chloe!! Enjoy!Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04822472844833732246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-22902465300994879312013-03-15T20:28:31.995-05:002013-03-15T20:28:31.995-05:00Loved the structure and sound of the poem. And th...Loved the structure and sound of the poem. And the way you ended, revealing but not telling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-39112827915852804432013-03-15T20:26:16.873-05:002013-03-15T20:26:16.873-05:00The structure of your poem and the sound details b...The structure of your poem and the sound details built the anticipation perfectly... and what a lovely thing it is that's coming! I hope you enjoy the visit! :-)JenniferMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09603450967368808356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-69372640377568414272013-03-15T20:06:00.492-05:002013-03-15T20:06:00.492-05:00I love the way you built the suspense....and then....I love the way you built the suspense....and then...so the silence will be broken. This is good.<br />Jackie http://familytrove.blogspot.com/Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04407984356664747500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-11957217065624389702013-03-15T19:54:47.992-05:002013-03-15T19:54:47.992-05:00Your poem capture's anticipation. Waiting for...Your poem capture's anticipation. Waiting for the fun to begin.LibraryDragon/Storykeeperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13695194443477630515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1015645269607993268.post-88125255410960385752013-03-15T17:42:28.558-05:002013-03-15T17:42:28.558-05:00This is exciting stuff! I always imagine this is h...This is exciting stuff! I always imagine this is how my parents' cats feel before we descend upon their space, I love the way you set up your poem...I felt like I was waiting too! Have a fun weekend!bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05205255058860911148noreply@blogger.com